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Post by first solo on Dec 11, 2006 20:32:57 GMT -5
Show Name: First Solo Call Name: Solo Age: 3 Gender: Mare Height: will top out at 17.1 hands, but currently 16.3 Breed: Dutch Warmblood Riding Discipline: Not yet broke, but she has potential to do anything. Her sire did up to Prix St George while her dam was competing in the Grand Prix jumpers. She'd make a fantastic eventer, dressage horse, or jumper. However despite not being backed, she has shown in several inhand and conformation classes always pinning in the top five. Appearance: Bay with half a star and stripe and three white socks. She has very deep black points which really make her stand out. Her big bones and large joints provide maximum shock absorbtion and a nice short back makes it easy for her to stay round and come through with her hinds. She has a very lovely build with a nice topline, in additon to fantastic gaits with nice knee action and large swinging gaits. All of which make her very much the ideal warmblood. Personality: Exceptionally intelligent, but also relatively stubborn; she likes to have things go her way. She has learned that she can get away with some naughty stuff from her previous owners and will take advantage of people. She knows she's big and she's not afraid to show off, even if it takes a bit of intimidation. When the spotlight is on her she certainly knows how to impress the crowd with her amazing step. Her exceptionally tough and arrogant personality makes her somewhat difficult at times.
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Post by Sakura Sake on Dec 11, 2006 20:34:05 GMT -5
You need to write at least five sentences in both appearance and personality.. Right now, you have one run on sentence. If you do that, I can accept you.
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Post by first solo on Dec 11, 2006 20:49:35 GMT -5
hehe, sorry was going for the preview button and hit the post button it'll be all nice and done in about a minute
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Post by Sakura Sake on Dec 11, 2006 20:54:24 GMT -5
Your sentences are still fragments in the appearance. I don't like fragments XD Besides that, completely lovely.
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Post by first solo on Dec 11, 2006 21:01:07 GMT -5
There we go all done.. haha sorry my thinking is pretty fragmented today.
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Post by Sakura Sake on Dec 11, 2006 21:02:30 GMT -5
Yay! ACCEPTED
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