|
Post by The Black Rose on Dec 5, 2006 15:14:13 GMT -5
Dedicated to Masi >.>
|
|
|
Post by Sakura Sake on Dec 5, 2006 23:37:01 GMT -5
God, they're so frucking cute XD We obviously need lives And lucky you can write songs. I'm more of a book person myself... *dances about paper that was set aflame* Tis cute and interesting. It was nice that you added coffee!
|
|
|
Post by The Black Rose on Dec 5, 2006 23:55:38 GMT -5
I'm much more of a book person myself. But I write stories and poems, and a song is basically a poem. So...yea...
And yes, they are way too cute for their own good, and yes, we do need lives.
And yes, coffee is good and keeps me from falling asleep over the keyboard xD
|
|
|
Post by The Black Rose on Dec 7, 2006 21:58:18 GMT -5
Yay! It's finished! ...Now for the editing ^-^;
|
|
|
Post by The Black Rose on Dec 7, 2006 22:06:48 GMT -5
I'm not too pleased with the ending. I'm trying to rephrase the chorus in this verse, but it's hard to get a word rhyming with out, that doesn't sound like forced rhyme (like I had to do here), and has the same subject as the original sentence(in the chorus).
|
|